Why I said what I said to Parris and Joshua.

Well I said what I said to these two was very simple. While both there shorts were very good they lacked certain detail's in there example's that could have made it so much better to understand what they were talking about. Joshua had his points across very well but his example's lacked in backing them up. Parris was all over the place and although she described the picture pretty good, the fact is that Parris kept coming back to the same thing over and over again and it was just like a very long run on sentence that had nothing to back up what she was saying in the short. They have some pretty good potential, but it was lacking and they can do better.